Thursday, April 22, 2010
Revisions
All of my papers are getting totally revised. On my personal Analysis I am changing my entire essay/thesis/arguement...I am going to choose an entirely new person because I had trouble picking a topic to write about to begin with. This is probably my weakest area in this paper. And on my research paper I am in the process of revising my introduction paragraph to match my body paragraphs more precisely. This should be the easiest for me because it is where I have the most interest on the topics. And finally the McCandless Essay needs a lot of focus help--I feel like my focus is totally off at some points of my essay. Hopefully this will be pretty easy to fix.
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I believe that your research essay is the your strongest paper. You provide very good examples in this paper. The only thing that I would change in this paper is the focus you paper on race and not on race and family because it makes the paper less confusing. I would talk not just how the Fresh Prince has effected race but also other TV shows. Other than that you paper is very good. I have not read your personal analysis paper yet but I would just be careful that you have enough revision time on your paper if you are completely redoing the paper.
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