Revisions

All of my papers are getting totally revised. On my personal Analysis I am changing my entire essay/thesis/arguement...I am going to choose an entirely new person because I had trouble picking a topic to write about to begin with. This is probably my weakest area in this paper. And on my research paper I am in the process of revising my introduction paragraph to match my body paragraphs more precisely. This should be the easiest for me because it is where I have the most interest on the topics. And finally the McCandless Essay needs a lot of focus help--I feel like my focus is totally off at some points of my essay. Hopefully this will be pretty easy to fix.